I really liked the suggested revisions with sensory details that many of you offered in class today. Once you add in at least three exploded moments tonight as your homework, I think you'll really see your stories come to life.

DO NOT FORGET to come straight to the library tomorrow with your revised story on a flash drive or saved to your U drive or Skydrive.

This week'svocabulary is due on Wednesday and the test is on Thursday.

Have a great night!